Talk:The Edible Page (Blank Page = I'm currently writing the story)/@comment-25131761-20150822081638

Good effort, but I'm not a big fan of it.

Don't take this personally, but I find that the amounts of gibberish in the pasta ruins the experience. I know it was your intention, but maybe using asteriks could do the job next time.

As William Edward Hickson said, "If at first you don't succeed, try, try again."

4/10.